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Penny looked up at the sky and wished it would rain something fun....like marshmallows..instead of cold, wet raindrops. Suddenly she felt a soft plop on her head. She looked up and couldn't believe her eyes. It was
Thursday, March 3, 2011
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Anna Diaz
raining and the sky was all dark and scary. Penny didnt know what was going on at first but then she figered it out and she started to eun to her house. Penny was happy to be back in her house agian out of the cold wet rain.
Serena Kornbrek
it was CHOCLATE!! she didn't know what to do and all she could this about was how much she loved it!! :p
so she opened her mouth so some can fall in... and it did! and she had a sugar rush and was sooo happy!! so the next day she was waiting for it to rain again but nothing happened, so ahe did that for 2 weeks and just stopped waiting.... so when she was older in like her 40's she walked outside and it was raing CHOCLATE!!! and she thought to herslef that dreams do come true!!!
THE END!! :P
robert kiger
the story doesn't make any sense at all.
It was a raindrop. She was disappointed and went inside. When she looked outside later she found out it was actually snow. So she went outside. After the snow she went inside because it started raining again.
After she went inside she got bored. So she went to bed. The next morning she got out of bed and looked outside. To her surprise it was sunny so she went outside to play basketball.
But just when she started shooting hoops it started to rain. But she looked at the ground. It was raining marshmellows! So she ran inside and told her parents. Then they all enjoyed eating marshmellows. THE END
Chase Boggs
alexis rambo
It was a marshmellows and it started hitting her head.then choclote that was melted came down.Then she looked and it was gramcrackers.She was so happy.She ran inside screaming it is raining smores.
so her mom and dad brother micludedtunes and sister lasterana came outside too. and it wasnt doing that anymore. so they all said stop lieing penny and went back in. then penny came back out and it started rain that again. then she thought well why dont i show them by showing them the ground.
so she went back inside and told them to come back out she wanted to show them something. so she went back in and told them to come out again. so they did and the ground had nothing on it and so she looked at it and her mom said you really need to stop lieing and her mom told her to go to her room and no dinner for lieing. then she woke up and she wanted it to rain raindrops
Garrett Rudy
It was soup. She couldnt tell what kind though. It just kept on pouring soup. She ran inside to get a bowl. She set the bowl on the ground and it filled up.
She tasted the soup and it was clam chowder. Yuck! She hated clam chowder with a passion. She was very hungry though. She ate all the soup and decided it wasnt so bad so she ate another bowl and another and she kept on eating soup. She wished she had crackers but they didnt rain.
After he ate the soup she exploded! She woke up to her alarm and realized it was a bad dream. She went to school and they served clam chowder. She didnt eat it though. She never ate clam chowder again.
nathan bliss
it was a white marshamellow.that fell from the sky.because the girl wanted marshmellows.then it started to rain marshmellows,
the end
jack pitts
A large potato it was loaded. There was sourcream, chives, bacon, cheese, salt and peper and onionrings from mr.wings. If i were penny i woud get a plate a fork and a knife and dig in.
Dalton
I think that it means.That she was doin somthin fun.And it rained.Like once I was playing and it rained.So I went in for an hour then it stoped
Mason Brown
It was orange pop raining from the sky she thinks its a dream so she piched herself like a million tumes. But it was real not fake. SHe went inside and told all of her family, she ran down the block and told her best friend Beddy White.They played in the orange rain all day.
That night she wished that it would rain chocolate covered strawberries. THat was her favorite food ever, she askedher dad if he would back his truck out of the garage and let the truck fill up. So her dad did just that. She was the happiest girl on earth so she thought.
The next day she went outside and it had snowed ICE CREAM!!!!!!!!! her favorite ice cream strawberry. She got her sled and went up to the highest mountian in Gumbo and went down the hill. She did this for hours and hours until she died of hypothermia cause she didnt listen to her dad and mom cause she was to exited
Aron Brown
It was giant cookies. She ran in and got 5 giant baskets and went back outside to fill up the baskets. But when she filled them up they were to heavy to carr back . She thout about asking her sister for help. "But wanted to keep it a seret. SO she goes and gets a wheelbarrow.
Kassidy Owens
Penny looked up and saw skittles. They where so colorful. Then she looked up again and saw mashed potatoes it lookes like snow. Penny looked up once more but didn't see anything.
Then Penny looked up again and saw a big huge black cloud she didn't know what to do.So penny kept looking up and saw muffins comeing down she thought she could get a whole bunch of food for the year but they just vanished.So she could only eat a few things in case they were for you.
Penny went inside and listened to the news they wehre talking about what had happened.Then they said there was a crash and it exploded.So It made Penny mad.
The End
MEAGAN MURPHEY
IT WAS A MARSHMELLOW!!!!! HER WISH CAME TRUE. FINALLEY ONE OF HER WISHIES CAME TRUE.SHE RAN INSIDE AND TOLD HER MOM AND DAD. THEY DID NOT BELIVE IT, IT WAS RAINING MARSHMELLOWS.
SHE TOLD ALL HER FRINDES AND FAMILY. THEY SAID IT WAS A MIRACAEL. "HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN" SAID HER GRANDMA. HER MOM SAID "MAKE IT RAIN SKITTELS." SO PENNEY WISHED IT WOULD RAIN SKITTELS AND IT DID.
HER DAD SAID "MAKE IT RAIN TWIZZLERS." SO SHE WISHED IT WOULD RAIN TWIZZLERS AND IT DID. THEN SHE WOKE UP AND RAN OUTSIDE TO TELL HER MOM ABOUT THE AMAZING DREAM. SHE FOUND HER MOM PICKING UP, M&M'S, SKITTEL'S, AND TWIZZLERS OUTSIDE. WAS IT A DERAM.
Paige Woods
It was marshmallows! They were blue and pink. But they came alive! Penny was so happy. She didn't want to eat them because she wanted to play with them.
They had so much fun together. They had a tea party. They sang songs and watched T.V. Then one of the marshmallows said, "Let's play a game!" So they all did.
But Penny didn't know that the marshmellows like to cheat. Penny hated cheaters but, loved marshmallows. She didn't know what to do so she jusy sat there and cried. Then it stopped raining marshmallows so they all evaporated. Penny now doesn't ever eat marshmallows.
Grace Erickoson
a pancake. Then something cold fell on her back, it was a can of coke. Before she knew it fun foods were falling everywhere. She thought to her self how could this be happening but it was. Every one around her was laughing so she started laughing too.
There where all kinds of food falling everywhere. There where strawberries, ice cream, hot dogs, funnle cakes, and everything else you could think of. But Penny's fav. was the marshmallows that fell. Then all the food started to grow. The strawberries same up to her waist.
The the sun came out. And it stopped raining food. Then she went outside. All of her friends came over. They ran around town and had a bite af everything,and then whent to bed on a giant pancake.
Isaac Cron
A marshmallow was in pennys hair.
marshmallows were everywhear.
she needed to get home. the road was sticky. the cars were sticking to the road.
the school was canseldthe nekt day.
Kassidy Owens
Penny looked up and saw skittles. They where so colorful. Then she looked up again and saw mashed potatoes it lookes like snow. Penny looked up once more but didn't see anything.
Then Penny looked up again and saw a big huge black cloud she didn't know what to do.So penny kept looking up and saw muffins comeing down she thought she could get a whole bunch of food for the year but they just vanished.So she could only eat a few things in case they were for you.
Penny went inside and listened to the news they wehre talking about what had happened.Then they said there was a crash and it exploded.So It made Penny mad.
The End
Marshall Herrick
It was rain and it was coming down hard then thunder. When it stopped she saw a rainbow whichwas really pretty. Then she played in the mud she got really dirty and she went in to take a bath. The next day she got a haircut it was really awsome.
The next day it was raning not that hard but it stoped to fast and then it stared to come down with marshamallow they thought it was hail at first hit one of them then they found out it was to soft they were marshmallows.
The girl passed out then she woke up then there was a lot of marshmallows then she scremed then she ate all of the marshmallows.
BLAKE GONZALEZ
it was a nice monstar. and it was fat. so Penny took him inside. and give him some pizza.and the monster
told her his name was asdf.
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