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"Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky....."
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Dante
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not ricky, was unsanitise. he never washed his hands.never even his food before he ate. he was very descusten.never be like ricky.
travis
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. Because ricky was a weirdo. he ate bird poo a cow pies when he woke up. he drank deer pee with his coco roos.
other racoons thought he was crazy. they were all suprised he didnt have food poisioning. they all puked when he does nasty things. he was not very sanitary. he bathed in poop.
one day he ate cow poop and got food posioning and got very sick. so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky.All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate but not ricky. because he licked his hands clean because he is a wild animal. and all.Ricky Also licks his food so they can be clean and all that.
All the other raccoons think he is disgusting and all that. he got killed because he got a disease and all that because he did not. wash his hands and clean his food.So now ricky is gone Bye bye ricky.
Now there is a new raccoon like ricky named Billy bob and he is just like ricky and he got a disease too! bye bye billy bob! And there is no more disgusting raccoons now because they all died from diseases and all that other stuff. because they did not wash there hands and clean there food. But there will always be a disgusting raccoon and a raccoon like ricky and ricky was a trouble maker too. he got in a lot of fights and stole food because he was a cannible and all that other stuff he is like a hobo Lol.Rickys favorite food was Fried rats.He loved fried rats.But i feel so sorry for ricky because he died from a disease and all that but everything dies well this is the end if the story now so bye bye.
☺☻♥Garrett Valentine☺☻♥
once there was a raccoon named Ricky. all the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate but not Ricky. he never washed his hands. he didnt like the cold water or the thick soap thatthe forest had and loved and cherished. he would always leave the others alone when they ate and nobody knew about his secret.
one day he went out to his favorite spot out by the old wood in the center of the forest. nobody had ever found him there and he didnt like the other dirty hiding places that he had. such as the old trash can and the picnic table that was molded over. he sat and ate his lunch. there was an old sandwich he had found at the edge of the forest that morning. and there was also a few chips and a dounut from the public library.
he was eating when he saw mary. he saw a little girl and she tried to be nice. she didnt care about the dirtyness of his fur and his food.she became her friend and they grew up in the forest and in her home. he got the good soap and the warm water that he had always wanted. they were always together. the end!!!!
Erica Vaughn
once there was a raccoon named ricky. all the other raccoons would wash thier hands and even their food befpre they ate, but not ricky.he always put mud on his hands before he ate and he never cleaned his food. he was a very lazy raccoon when he wanted to be. he loved to eat pizza by the appartments.
he was a city raccoon. one day he was enjoying beef roast when a tiny cat spaceship came by and shot him with a stun booty dart. when he woke up he was strapped to a table and a kitty cat was taking blood from him. they were akso studying him like an alien. then he squeld and started struggling agenst the restraints.
then they gave him a shot in the brain and he lost all his momorys. when he woke up he was by the appartments and he was by a dumpster and he wondered why he was there.then he found some other raccoons and ate with them and he cleaned his hands and his food.the other raccoons were stunned.and after that he was a good little ricky for ever and ever.
justin okeefe
Jesse
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food they ate, but not Ricky. He hated water. He never took a bath either. The only thing he bathed in was mud. Every morning he would wake up with hard mud dried on his body.
One day he woke up and shook the mud off of him and ate breakfast. After that he started to go outside but he felt very horrible. His mom got the doctor to come and examine Ricky. She diagnosed it as food poisoning. She said that he could die from it.
Ricky was very scared and shocked. The doctor said that she could cure this disease but he had to wash his hands, wash his food, and he had to take a bath every night. Ricky gladly agreed. Now Ricky is teaching his kids how to clean themselves. They lived happily ever after.
once Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. he would just dig in. he diddent mind.
once he got a rotten thing of cheese and ate it. then he started to feel sick so he went to the raccoon vet. the vet told him he had a food viros and that he would half to be carfull what he ate. so he did. then one day he just started eating junk and molded food.
then he felt even wors so he went back to the vet.the vet told him that he had 1 week to live. so he was really sad so he started to be clean and he washed his food before he ate. and he went back to the vet 1 more time before he died but the vet told him he was just joking the vet wanted him to be more healthy and it worked
THE END
BY CODY
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate. But not Ricky did not.ricky was not going to get sick he said. but he did and he died.everybody went to his funeral. than everybody got sick. than everybody died. everybod went to everybodys funeral.than everybody in the world died of a sickness. and all of the peoplre lived a little longer. but zackary sirkel did not die. ricky and zackary sirkel lived happily ever after.the end of the story right now.not really no its not.never live like ricky and zackary sirkel.well you heard the story now you see the movie.then ricky changed so now you shpuld live like ricky.
zackary
sirkel
jacob
once there was a raccoon named ricky.all the other raccoons would wash their food before they ate but not ricky.....he always licked his hands.
one day ricky had licked his hand s way to much and he got the H1N1 and he had to go to the hospital and get a shot but ricky didnt whant a shot so ricky didnt go to the hospital and ricky got even more sick and so he whent to the hospital and died from the shot because dr. jacob mcbee pit posion in his shot.
jacob
once there was a raccoon named ricky.all the other raccoons would wash their food before they ate but not ricky.....he always licked his hands.
one day ricky had licked his hand s way to much and he got the H1N1 and he had to go to the hospital and get a shot but ricky didnt whant a shot so ricky didnt go to the hospital.
ricky got even more sick and so he whent to the hospital and died from the shot because dr. jacob mcbee pit posion in his shot.
dudo
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. Because ricky was a weirdo. he ate bird poo a cow pies when he woke up. he drank deer pee with his coco roos.
other racoons thought he was crazy. they were all suprised he didnt have food poisioning. they all puked when he does nasty things. he was not very sanitary. he bathed in poison.
one day he ate cow poop and got food posioning and got very sick. so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky.All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate but not ricky. because he licked his hands clean because he is a wild animal. and all.Ricky Also licks his food so they can be clean and all that.
All the other raccoons think he is disgusting and all that. he got killed because he got a disease and all that because he did not. wash his hands and clean his food.So now ricky is gone Bye bye ricky.
Now there is a new raccoon like ricky named Billy bob and he is just like ricky and he got a disease too! bye bye billy bob! And there is no more disgusting raccoons now because they all died from diseases and all that other stuff. because they did not wash there hands and clean there food. But there will always be a disgusting raccoon and a raccoon like ricky and ricky was a trouble maker too. he got in a lot of fights and stole food because he was a cannible and all that other stuff he is like a hobo Lol.Rickys favorite food was Fried rats.He loved fried rats.But i feel so sorry for ricky because he died from a disease and all that but everything dies well this is the end if the story now so bye bye.
☺☻♥Garrett Valentine☺☻♥
once their was a raccoon named ricky. all the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food beforethey ate,but not ricky......
ricky was unnn sanatare and so heee got sick.an then no bodie wanted to be around him. an so he got so sad but he got so sick that he could not move.so then his brother taco got sick becuse they lived in the same house.and so taco had to go to the hastpitil.
and he got put in I.C.U.and then died in a few days. but his mom still hade ricky but then ricky.but then the mom got sick and then died. to so ricky got so sad becuse his mom died.and then ricky died and had a littel funarall and got put in a caskit.
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Once there was a raccoon named Ricky.All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate but not ricky. because he licked his hands clean because he is a wild animal. and all.Ricky Also licks his food so they can be clean and all that.
All the other raccoons think he is disgusting and all that. he got killed because he got a disease and all that because he did not. wash his hands and clean his food.So now ricky is gone Bye bye ricky.
Now there is a new raccoon like ricky named Billy bob and he is just like ricky and he got a disease too! bye bye billy bob! And there is no more disgusting raccoons now because they all died from diseases and all that other stuff. because they did not wash there hands and clean there food. But there will always be a disgusting raccoon and a raccoon like ricky and ricky was a trouble maker too. he got in a lot of fights and stole food because he was a cannible and all that other stuff he is like a hobo Lol.Rickys favorite food was Fried rats.He loved fried rats.But i feel so sorry for ricky because he died from a disease and all that but everything dies well this is the end if the story now so bye bye.
☺☻♥Garrett Valentine☺☻♥
travis
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. Because ricky was a weirdo. he ate bird poo a cow pies when he woke up. he drank deer pee with his coco roos.
other racoons thought he was crazy. they were all suprised he didnt have food poisioning. they all puked when he does nasty things. he was not very sanitary. he bathed in poop.
one day he ate cow poop and got food posioning and got very sick. so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. The day later ricky was crying, he went outside and dug a hole in the ground and layed down and coved his self he died that day and no one liked him any way so nobody went to his funeral and after then everybody died as well then i was the only person that lived because they were so dumb to protect there self form the sickness.
☺☻♥Brandalyn
Bradt☺☻♥
Once there was a racoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash there hands and even their food but not Richy. He would eat with his hands coverd in mud. He hated all the other raccoons. They made him feel dirty.
One day he desided to but their food in mud. He thought it would show them. It didn't work. They would just wash their hands and food till it shined. It made him furious.
He one day decided to wash his hands and food and see what was so special. It made the food so much better. He decides that it is better to wash his hands. He enjoyed the food so much better. He will always wash his hands.
Brandon emmert
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. Ricky got sick after he ate. He didn`t know why he got sick.
One day Ricky got so sick he went to the hospital. Ricky was sick with the Flu. Poor Ricky was in the hospital for a very long time. Ricky's mom told him that he needed to start washing his hands before he ate. Ricky told his mom that he did. Ricky is a lier!
Ricky felt guilty about lying. He was then released from the hospital. Ricky started washing his hands. Ricky knew what not wasking his hands can do to someone. He will never do it again.
Hannah B.
ricky never talked to any body. he naver washed his hands (thats nasty). so next time he dident wash his hands he got so sick... he did not die but the docter said that he had eatin mold.then his mom asked ricky if he washed his hands.
ricky said no way???????????? his mom said thats probley way you are sick. ricky said oooohhhhhh so what.his mom said so start washing your hands and this wont happen.ricky said well it gets me out of school.
rickys mom yelled at him for not washing his hands.then ricky said i dont care.his mom said well go to school sick. then that night ricky said to his mom im sorry. his mom said its ok then from that point on he alwyas washed his hands.
by joey doran
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food they ate, but not Ricky. He hated water. He never took a bath either. he all ways stank like body oddor and he never had any friends he all ways walked around lonely and scared off all of his food.so he only ate grass, roots,and berries.
Then one day he felt very horrible. so he went to the doctor he had a serious skin condition. the doctor said he needed to start taking a bath and he would feel better soon so Ricky started taking baths.
By:Alex Manning
Once thier was a raccon named rickey.All the other raccons would wash thier hand's and evan out their food before they ate, but not rickey... But Rickey didnt care about germ's so he would'nt wash his hanfs like the other's.
But one day afternoon when ricky was making dinner for his familey and they said he hadd to wash his hands of he wanted to make dinner for them so he wemt out side and washed his hands in mud!!!!:\ wich wasnt good cause when he making dinner he got a mix upp with mud and some other stuff. That was mixed in with the mud!..
So his famly finally noticed that his hands were muddie but they said we told you to wash your hands rickey said, i did in mud!and u never said what i had to wash my hands in:) So he contuined to cook dinner that evening.Amd then after they ate dinner they ALL DiED!!!.?Becauase of Rickeys muddie and other sruff that was on his hand's!! so know RIcky washes his hands know wich is a good thing no one will dioe know! HOPEFULYY:)
BY:kATIE keaTHLEy!:)~
"Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky.he was a menntal raccoon
other racoons thought he was crazy. they were all suprised he didnt have food poisioning. they all puked when he does nasty things. he was not very sanitary. he bathed in poop.
one day he ate cow poop and got food posioning and got very sick. so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.
ricky was always a nastey ratcoon. he never washed his hands. no one like rickey cause of tht. he dident like tht now won liked him. he wished to change gis ways but he just couldent.
ricky always tryed to be like the other ratcoons. but he just couldent cause he was so nasty. all of the pther ratcoons made fun pf him. he tryed to egnor it most of tge time. but he necer could it was just to hard.
one day rickry finaly went to the bathroom. and gess what it was for ricky was finaly going to wash his hands. so he walked out the door. went to the bathroom and he xame out with clean hands. all the other rtciins liked him now.
brenden
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky.Ricky was alergic to water and soap and if used it his head would explode.He never had clean hands or food.All the other racoons thought he had brain damage and could't wash his hands.
Ricky had no friends and every one made fun of him.He told then he was alergic but they didn't listen.Some times he wished his that his head would explode.And wait a minute.He could make his head explode.
So when it came to lunch for the racoons Ricky dumoed the whole bottle on his head.Five seconds later his head exploded and that was the end of Ricky.All the other racoons felt so bad that they didn't listen to him.So when his head pieces came down they hit every single racoon got hit.They all became alergic to soap and water.
THE END
Aaliyah Elkins
Addie Pulsipher
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food befor they ate, but not Ricky. He couldn't stand the pure shine after he washed. No, he hated clean things, anything he touched that was clean, was a puttred mess once he was done with it.
When his mom had had enough of Ricky's fillth,she really had enough. Right when Ricky got home from school, she made him get sparkley clean. Ricky was so mad. For the next hour he rolled around in the mud and every thing else.Once it was time for dinner, he had recoverd his stench and his puttred looks.
When his mom called him into dinner, his mother and father did not look happy. They sent Ricky to the bathroom and he washed up. Once he was done, they sent him to bed without supper.Once he was in bed they talked to him about the chose he made. Finally they got to the point annd he ended up having to scrub every two hours. Ricky was not a happy camper, but he had learned his lesson.
Lane Taylor
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before the ate, but not Ricky. He would get sick often and he has a big habit of not washing his hands. Also he couldnt stand the clean smell he liked the dirty smell. He was too lazy to clean food and his hands.
One day he was scheduled to go to the doctor. The doctor said if he doesnt clean his food he will die. Then he said ok when he got home he tried it and he said eww. Then he saw his friend Bob and bob said please try to eat clean food. One day he went to the park and he thought why should I do this I dont even care. But he thought I do care about my family.
So the next month he ate clean and the doctor said he was doing great. And then Ricky was healthy as a bird he sang and played all day long. His family was so proud of him. Then one day Ricky didnt feel good he went to the doctor. The doctor said he ate a not clean thing so the doctor said he would die but Ricky didnt he grew up strong and healthy.
THE END *_*
"Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky.he was a menntal raccoon
other racoons thought he was crazy. they were all suprised he didnt have food poisioning. they all puked when he does nasty things. he was not very sanitary. he bathed in poop.
one day he ate cow poop and got food posioning and got very sick. so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.
garett lynch
Isaac gibson
Once thier was a raccoon named ricky .All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate,but not Ricky he would just eat his food right away.Ricky did this every day.One day ricky got so sick that he was going to die all the other raccons tryed their best to make him last longer.
The raccoon doctor came and said it was a new germ sickness that it was called germ cancer and it can cause death to him.If we dont get him gone now the planet will be destroed.
The raccoon family had to kill him and they were very sad to have him die.
Damion Musselman
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky. Ricky thought doing that would make him ill. One of his friends said that he would be fine. But he never would wash his hands or wash his food.
One day Ricky felt ill. He ate his food. He still felt ill. So, he went to a friends house. His friend said to wash his hands and wash his food.
He washed his hands and washed his food before he ate. So, when his friend came over. Ricky looked better then ever. So, his friend told every body that Ricky washed every thing. So, Ricky washed every thing he wanted.
he is so bad.he is a good boy
raccoons would wash their hands and even their food before they ate, but not Ricky.he was a menntal raccoon so sick he died in cow poop. all the other racoons were very sad. kidding they were all happy he died.happily ever after.food posioning and got very sick.
dusty
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons washed their hands and evern their food befor they ate,but not Ricky.When Ricky was a boy he always liked things different. All the other boys were into girl raccoons but not Ricky he liked airplanes and bace ball cards.The other raccoon boys thought he was weird and he would never would be cool enoph to have a pritty girl.
Then one day when all the raccoon boys had there pritty dates to take to the middle school dance there was a beautiful raccoon girl who walked into the room. Ricky's eyes were BIG he never saw siomething so beautiful and he about fainted! She walked right over to him and said"Hi my name is Roseta" Ricky was surprized he had never talked to a girl before. Soon later all the boys started to fall for Roseta but she just keep her eyes on Ricky. Ricky was surprized, he soon asked Roseta to the dance!
When they danced together it seemed that the moon shown brighter and his heart grew bigger.
Every time Roseta would laugh he new that she was the one because she brought joy to his heart.When everyone grew up him and Roseta still stayed together. They soon got married and had 18 special raccoon babies. Ricky soon relized its not so bad to be different!
Brionna Halverson
Once there was a raccoon named Ricky. All the other raccoons washed their hands and evern their food befor they ate,but not Ricky.When Ricky was a boy he always liked things different. All the other boys were into girl raccoons but not Ricky he liked airplanes and bace ball cards.The other raccoon boys thought he was weird and he would never would be cool enoph to have a pritty girl.
Then one day when all the raccoon boys had there pritty dates to take to the middle school dance there was a beautiful raccoon girl who walked into the room. Ricky's eyes were BIG he never saw siomething so beautiful and he about fainted! She walked right over to him and said"Hi my name is Roseta" Ricky was surprized he had never talked to a girl before. Soon later all the boys started to fall for Roseta but she just keep her eyes on Ricky. Ricky was surprized, he soon asked Roseta to the dance!
When they danced together it seemed that the moon shown brighter and his heart grew bigger.
Every time Roseta would laugh he new that she was the one because she brought joy to his heart.When everyone grew up him and Roseta still stayed together. They soon got married and had 18 special raccoon babies. Ricky soon relized its not so bad to be different!
Brionna Halverson
Once there was a raccon named Ricky.All the other raccons would wash their hands and even their food befor they ate,but not Ricky he never washed his hands.One day one of his frinds was handing out ivatations for an eat out.Ricky walked up to his friend Joe and asked him for one and he said no.Joe said "You dont wash your hands or take care of your self.
That night when Ricky went hime he said he did not need frinds.He went on the next day with out talking with anyone.The day befor the eat out Ricky could not stand not talking to anyone.He decided he will talk to Joe about it.The next day he walked up to his door and knock.
Ricky said he would wash his hands and take care of his self.Joe is going to let him in.He went straight to the sink to wash his hands.He had a graet time.From that day on he always washed his hands.
Alexys Durham
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